First attempt at photoshoping a portrait

Hey guys,
After many attempts on the same image i think i finally got something that is not complete and udder crap...
Let me know what you think, i`ll put the original up as well so people can tell me where i went wrong.
Photoshop Attempt

Original

I am really keen to get peoples feedback and let me know where i went wrong on this. Best way to learn is dive in the deep end
Regards
Jay Quinn
After many attempts on the same image i think i finally got something that is not complete and udder crap...
Let me know what you think, i`ll put the original up as well so people can tell me where i went wrong.
Photoshop Attempt

Original

I am really keen to get peoples feedback and let me know where i went wrong on this. Best way to learn is dive in the deep end

Regards
Jay Quinn