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Erin & Carly

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Sat Dec 06, 2008 5:56 pm

Cheers for having a gander :)

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Lol sorry Carly ...
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Re: Erin & Carly

Postby shakey on Sat Dec 06, 2008 6:26 pm

Of these I like #2. Like the interaction between the two models
#3 looks like her face is made of plastic. Too much PP I reckon
#4. Good concept but I find the water on her left eye and what's happenening to that eye a bit wierd.
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Re: Erin & Carly

Postby chrisk on Sat Dec 06, 2008 6:38 pm

like the eye contact in #2. too much PP is #3 imo
the detail in the shot of #4 is astonishing. wow.
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Re: Erin & Carly

Postby ozboyerp on Sat Dec 06, 2008 7:16 pm

Love 1 - 2 & 3...

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Re: Erin & Carly

Postby Ant on Sat Dec 06, 2008 9:46 pm

Love #2.

#4 looks like a great idea, but also looks like she was expecting it.

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Re: Erin & Carly

Postby Glen on Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:13 pm

Dan to me the skintones on the model on the right seem almost too white and bouncing back your lights in 1 and 2
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Re: Erin & Carly

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:39 pm

Glen wrote:Dan to me the skintones on the model on the right seem almost too white and bouncing back your lights in 1 and 2


hey mate yeah spot on the model closest to cam had milky white skin, and it was reflective lol

Maybe a little to hot :)

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Re: Erin & Carly

Postby Killakoala on Mon Dec 08, 2008 6:35 pm

Very much your style Dan. Two lovely ladies too, captured nicely. Not sure about the water one though, but a good bit of fun.
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Re: Erin & Carly

Postby Oz_Beachside on Wed Dec 10, 2008 10:44 am

Cre8tivepixels wrote:
...Maybe a little to hot :)



you said it!
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