Awalk around Brissy

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Awalk around Brissy

Postby J.Davis on Fri Dec 12, 2008 9:54 pm

Went into Brisbane today with my D60 - comments welcome

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Re: Awalk around Brissy

Postby Big Red on Sun Dec 14, 2008 10:59 pm

great shots all of them :D
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Re: Awalk around Brissy

Postby Oneputt on Mon Dec 15, 2008 11:30 am

Nice shots John :D - it is something I do a couple of times a year, but normally on Sundays when it is not so busy.
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Re: Awalk around Brissy

Postby the foto fanatic on Mon Dec 15, 2008 1:51 pm

Constructive criticism:

#1 and #4 lack a main point of interest IMO. There needs to be something to capture the viewers attention, otherwise your eye wanders aimlessly around the image looking for something to settle on.

#2 has potential, but the large pillar takes up too much space. A slightly different photographic viewpoint may have improved this photo. The train moving in the background is terrific though.

#3 is quite good.

Thanks for sharing. :) :)
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Re: Awalk around Brissy

Postby llubnrut on Mon Dec 15, 2008 6:57 pm

Where in Brisbane is the first image. I thought I had seen everywhere in Brisbane but don't know where that is. Enlighten me please.

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Re: Awalk around Brissy

Postby georgie on Mon Dec 15, 2008 7:44 pm

llubnrut wrote:Where in Brisbane is the first image. I thought I had seen everywhere in Brisbane but don't know where that is. Enlighten me please.

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I was trying to work it out too - could only think of under a big bridge - maybe at Roma Street Parklands or the Dutton Park-St Lucia green bridge???

Looking forward to the answer
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Re: Awalk around Brissy

Postby J.Davis on Mon Dec 15, 2008 11:32 pm

You have very good eyes - that was when I got off the train in Ipswich, on my way home, It is the 'river walk'.
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