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Was thinking of Avalon Air show approaching so thought id make a banner from my existing 07 pics
Tell me what ya think....
jeez web version looks total rubbish vs original!

Nice! A mate of mine will go nuts over this one...

A few crits:

Needs more space at left to fit in "Connie"

Would look better cropped a bit more on the right

Bald head in the foreground needs to go

Then it would be spot on! (I guess the IMHO bit is taken as read in the critique section... )

Cheers

I knew it!!
after i cropped it i thought omg is that a head... no its a diff colour cloud! does look pink tho huh!
My intention with the text was to have pure white to the left then fade out to the right...my PP skills just weren't working and couldn't get the text layer to fade at just one end

Thanks for the ideas ill have another go
grrr cant get that 'head' out :S it keeps mutilating the black border :S

One second later and you had a blue sky background

Betty