Some Bikini Babe Images - Well it is Summer After All!

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Some Bikini Babe Images - Well it is Summer After All!

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Sun Jan 25, 2009 11:53 am

Thanks for looking any input to the betterment (is that a word) would be welcomed :)

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Re: Some Bikini Babe Images - Well it is Summer After All!

Postby blacknstormy on Sun Jan 25, 2009 7:48 pm

my other half said to tell you he fully appreciated your efforts :)
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Re: Some Bikini Babe Images - Well it is Summer After All!

Postby Myrtle on Sun Jan 25, 2009 8:46 pm

Dan
In #1 and #2 I found the ill fitting bikini top a distraction to what is otherwise beautiful images.
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Re: Some Bikini Babe Images - Well it is Summer After All!

Postby viper1968 on Sun Jan 25, 2009 8:50 pm

Hi Dan,
In No1 I find the spot at the top of the shot distracting me from the model. If you remove this No 1 and 2 are the pics for me. Great work.
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Re: Some Bikini Babe Images - Well it is Summer After All!

Postby jethro on Mon Jan 26, 2009 3:02 pm

Your'e the man Dan!
shoot it real.

look! and see. Shoot and feel
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Re: Some Bikini Babe Images - Well it is Summer After All!

Postby colin_12 on Mon Jan 26, 2009 3:56 pm

I know you are into art shots Dan, but the lighting in #3 is not adding to the image (jmo)
The rest are great as always.
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Re: Some Bikini Babe Images - Well it is Summer After All!

Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Jan 26, 2009 9:45 pm

#1 and #4 are my favourites in this selection...
for my taste #3 is overlit and as a result looks a little too plastic like (?) and #2 has a few little niggles that spoil it for me, a few of the strands of hair just stick out for me, and the swimmer bottoms aren't consistant (if that makes sense).
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Re: Some Bikini Babe Images - Well it is Summer After All!

Postby Big Red on Tue Jan 27, 2009 3:35 pm

the first girl is a stunner but the white eyes in #1 just stand out too much and the white of the bikini top side section distracts.

did i mention that she is a stunner :mrgreen:
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Re: Some Bikini Babe Images - Well it is Summer After All!

Postby ewm3 on Sun Feb 01, 2009 4:00 pm

thank you for sending these in!
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