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South West Rocks

Postby greencardigan on Tue Feb 10, 2009 11:52 am

I've had a few days at South West Rocks recently and pulled my camera out for the first time in ages.

The yellow umbrella cought my attention. Not sure if i'm happy with this result though.

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Re: South West Rocks

Postby surenj on Thu Feb 12, 2009 12:11 am

It's a bit oversaturated for my taste but like the blue, green, yellow bands...
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Re: South West Rocks

Postby gstark on Thu Feb 12, 2009 12:37 am

I think it would have been a stronger image had you moved the camera a little to the left, thus lacing the umbrella closer to the rh edge of the image. It needs to be about halfway towards that edge from where it is now.
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