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First time ive been able to get out in ages as i broke my big toe and havnt been able to walk properly let loan lean on one foot and climb down rocks with gear.


Some friends of mine got married last week and my present is this in a nice frame as it is the sunrise of the day they got married.


Im not happy with the text at the bottom so if anyone has a suggestion on a new text let me know
Regards


Jay

I am not big on captions or frames so I cannot offer any suggestions there, but have you considered removing some of the dark area on the bottom of the picture? Just a enough to get it into the one third ratio.

Also the horizon looks a fraction off horizontal.

With that said it would make a good piece for a wall.

HTH.

further to above. personally i;d keep the text simple. in a large frame that size that font will look really overbearing on my opinion. i wonder if just the date, names and location of the wedding would be an option for you rather than the caption ? just an idea.

great colours though.