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I was up in Brisbane this weekend and in order to avoid the in-laws I hired a studio...
Had 5 models and 2 MUAs lined up - but par for the course - only 2 models and 1 MUA turned up...

However, here are the first few images from that shoot...

First up : Lydia May... Aim: Fashion...






Please let me know what you think - what I can improve?

I quite like the BW. They all seem a bit oversharpened, with some obvious halos. I also find the lighting flat, and would prefer to see a greater key:fill ratio.

John, I'm not too sure about the arms cut off in the last two shots, but that's just me.

John, just love the third shot. So reminiscent of the 40’s, even down to the polka dot dress. The only thing missing is the cigarette holder

Thanks for the comments so far... Here's another with the whole body cut off...