Light painting

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Light painting

Postby J.Davis on Mon Apr 20, 2009 5:50 pm

First attempt at painting with light - C&C welcome.

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Re: Light painting

Postby Pa on Mon Apr 20, 2009 6:02 pm

Good first attempt John...I think it would look good with just the fan lit
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Re: Light painting

Postby tommyg on Mon Apr 20, 2009 6:06 pm

I can't decide if I'd like to see the blades on the windmill nice and sharp, or blurred further than you have gone. Nice composition.
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Re: Light painting

Postby CraigVTR on Mon Apr 20, 2009 7:15 pm

Fantastic as is.
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Re: Light painting

Postby Big V on Mon Apr 20, 2009 8:38 pm

Leave it as it is - very nice
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Re: Light painting

Postby J.Davis on Tue Apr 21, 2009 12:25 am

Thanks for the comments - it was worth getting eaten by the mozzies out there. :up:
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