Dawn Service | Greenwell Point.

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Dawn Service | Greenwell Point.

Postby norbs on Thu Apr 30, 2009 4:30 pm

Dawn Service shots.

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ANZAC Day Dawn Service at Greenwell Point.

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ANZAC Day Dawn Service at Greenwell Point.

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ANZAC Day Dawn Service at Greenwell Point.

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ANZAC Day Dawn Service at Greenwell Point.

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ANZAC Day Dawn Service at Greenwell Point.

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Greenwell Point.
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Re: Dawn Service | Greenwell Point.

Postby biggerry on Thu Apr 30, 2009 10:34 pm

tones and colours are great! the ones that standout for me are #1 and #3. #1 is simple and effective, you can distinguish the sailors nicely and the golden colours are great!

#3 is something different, a different aspect/pov which works well imo, maybe considered alittle cramped and maybe some cropping might help, nonetheless I like it the way it is.. :cheers:
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Re: Dawn Service | Greenwell Point.

Postby daniel_r on Mon May 04, 2009 3:16 pm

Superb photojournalism work!

The composition of the shots is well balanced, particularly #5.

#1 might benefit from a clone - is that 1 (maybe 2 near the RHS horizon) dust bunnies?
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Re: Dawn Service | Greenwell Point.

Postby norbs on Mon May 04, 2009 5:35 pm

daniel_r wrote:Superb photojournalism work!

The composition of the shots is well balanced, particularly #5.

#1 might benefit from a clone - is that 1 (maybe 2 near the RHS horizon) dust bunnies?


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Re: Dawn Service | Greenwell Point.

Postby DebT on Mon May 04, 2009 8:05 pm

Nicely done
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