First go at a new born

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First go at a new born

Postby J.Davis on Sat May 09, 2009 11:26 pm

Jackson arrived today and weighed in at 5lb 15 oz, four weeks early, Grandfather again and a new photo subject.

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Re: First go at a new born

Postby Marvin on Sun May 10, 2009 2:45 am

Congratulations. I really like the black and white ones, particularly the 2nd. Did you lighten the shadows a little where the hands meet? It seems a bit more grainy than the rest of the picture. I would perhaps crop off some of the adult's hand to focus more on the baby holding the thumb. I like the interaction between the mum(?) and the baby in the first.
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Re: First go at a new born

Postby Reschsmooth on Sun May 10, 2009 8:43 am

Congratulations. Nice shots. I think the B&W shots need more contrast to make them stand out. The first one in particular.
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Re: First go at a new born

Postby surenj on Sun May 10, 2009 8:53 pm

Congrats! I would agree with a little more contrast on the BW ones.
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Re: First go at a new born

Postby J.Davis on Mon May 11, 2009 12:40 am

I bounced the flash off the ceiling and the lower part of the fingers are in shadow, so I lightened the image to bring them up, and lost some impact. Still learning the intricacies of photoshop.
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