Feeding Time

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Feeding Time

Postby Alex on Sun May 31, 2009 11:11 pm

Any C&C is appreciated

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Re: Feeding Time

Postby Geoff on Mon Jun 01, 2009 4:30 pm

Nice shot Alex and I think the B&W suits it well.
For some constructive criticism, I'd suggest adding a bit of fill light, not too much as I find it just a LITTLE bit too contrasty. Maybe also a bit of gentle sharpening on the ear as it seems quite soft.
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Re: Feeding Time

Postby Alex on Mon Jun 01, 2009 5:54 pm

Thanks a lot Geoff. I agree regarding fill lighting as this kind of image requires a softer contrast.
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Re: Feeding Time

Postby Reschsmooth on Mon Jun 01, 2009 6:03 pm

Great shot Alex, and, as Geoff said, well converted to B&W. My only niggle is the bright white shoulder at the bottom. I wonder if you could dodge this a bit?
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Re: Feeding Time

Postby Matt. K on Mon Jun 01, 2009 10:06 pm

strong image! Could be improved if the babys shoulder was bare skin as the white material is a little distracting?
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