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Vivid Sydney

Postby biggerry on Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:01 am

yep, plenty of colours here! :up:

I reckon there is heaps of room for more creativity on the most photographed joint in sydney!

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Re: Vivid Sydney

Postby Pa on Mon Jun 01, 2009 8:33 am

great...

how long does this display go on for...
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Re: Vivid Sydney

Postby biggerry on Mon Jun 01, 2009 10:23 am

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Re: Vivid Sydney

Postby Geoff on Mon Jun 01, 2009 4:46 pm

Gerry - GREAT shots!
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Re: Vivid Sydney

Postby Reschsmooth on Mon Jun 01, 2009 5:12 pm

Great shots. My preference is for the third - I really like the composition.

For the first, part of me is wanting less identifcation of what it is - that is, a shot which gives less away that it is the SOH than the crop you have. Not sure if you can (or want to) achieve this with a crop?
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Re: Vivid Sydney

Postby biggerry on Mon Jun 01, 2009 11:45 pm

composition on this fugly building was hard - for me anyway, I tried up on the hill (on the path) just in the royal botanical gardens and thought it would be the best place but the fence is to high and the gaps too small :|

Additionally, i always felt i was too close or too far away :cough:

For the first, part of me is wanting less identifcation of what it is - that is, a shot which gives less away that it is the SOH than the crop you have. Not sure if you can (or want to) achieve this with a crop?


I got a few shots up close and personal, for example these two.

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I can't wait to get out and have another crack - hopefully it will not be so windy and wet!
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Re: Vivid Sydney

Postby colin_12 on Tue Jun 02, 2009 11:08 pm

These are cool Gerry,
I like the third in the first set, nice textures and colour.
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Re: Vivid Sydney

Postby Big V on Wed Jun 03, 2009 12:04 am

This will be a great event to allow people to show their creativity. Nice colours in these photos..
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