Cliched water drops....

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Cliched water drops....

Postby whitey on Thu Jun 11, 2009 5:57 pm

Something to do on a cold day. Bit of fun.

1. Image

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Re: Cliched water drops....

Postby Glen on Thu Jun 11, 2009 8:16 pm

The perfect symmetry of 3 gives it a very tranquil (dare I say balanced?) feel, especially with the calm green colour. Nice work.
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Re: Cliched water drops....

Postby gummi on Thu Jun 11, 2009 8:25 pm

Whoa!!! nice work Whitey!

Good timing with the shots, love the last one with that droplet looking like a perfect globe balanced on the tip of a mountain. Would that have been on the bounce back of the droplet? The colours do add alot to the pictures too, did you photoshop or use some type of backdrop/reflective surface?
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Re: Cliched water drops....

Postby whitey on Thu Jun 11, 2009 8:36 pm

gummi wrote:Whoa!!! nice work Whitey!

Thanks

Good timing with the shots,

Not really, I took about 200 shots in 10 minutes.

love the last one with that droplet looking like a perfect globe balanced on the tip of a mountain. Would that have been on the bounce back of the droplet?

yeah I think its the rebound.

The colours do add alot to the pictures too, did you photoshop or use some type of backdrop/reflective surface?

Just bounced a SB600 off a flourescent yellow and pink sheet of A4 paper.

Tutorial is over here http://strobist.blogspot.com/2009/05/ho ... h-one.html . Worth doing as for a noob like me you get a good understanding of the relationship between flash power, aperture and shutter speed.
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Re: Cliched water drops....

Postby gummi on Thu Jun 11, 2009 9:31 pm

whitey wrote:Tutorial is over here http://strobist.blogspot.com/2009/05/ho ... h-one.html . Worth doing as for a noob like me you get a good understanding of the relationship between flash power, aperture and shutter speed.


Thanks for the link, they have alot of stuff on that site don't they? more things to learn! :D
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Re: Cliched water drops....

Postby biggerry on Thu Jun 11, 2009 9:40 pm

nice work whitey, I like the last image the best :up: , how about getting closer, macro even, there would be a whole barrel of interesting reflections in that drop! I will have get me a sbXXX one day and try this.

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Re: Cliched water drops....

Postby DanW on Thu Jun 11, 2009 10:39 pm

Great job! #2 is my favourite. The rippled reflection gives it the edge.

I just went through the Strobist tutorial myself and I agree, it's a handy resource. Got me using manual flash for the first time. Now to get through the rest of them......
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Re: Cliched water drops....

Postby surenj on Thu Jun 11, 2009 11:43 pm

These are textbook water droplets! Did you use a macro lens or one of the lenses listed on your signature?
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Re: Cliched water drops....

Postby whitey on Fri Jun 12, 2009 8:36 am

surenj wrote: Did you use a macro lens or one of the lenses listed on your signature?

Hi surenj, D80 with 18-70DX, F/8 1/200. SB600 camera left @ 1/16 triggered by onboard flash.
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Re: Cliched water drops....

Postby aim54x on Fri Jun 12, 2009 10:43 am

biggerry wrote:I will have get me a sbXXX one day and try this.


Gerry I will lend you one of mine if you want. I can part with the SB-600 for a week or two. I dont think I have anything coming up, and if I do I can always get it off you quickly as well. PM/TXT/Call me to organise
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Re: Cliched water drops....

Postby surenj on Fri Jun 12, 2009 2:04 pm

Thanks Whitey for the info. I will give it a go this weekend...
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Re: Cliched water drops....

Postby biggerry on Fri Jun 12, 2009 2:32 pm

Gerry I will lend you one of mine if you want.


game-on, that would be awesome, will talk to you soon
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Re: Cliched water drops....

Postby Geoff on Fri Jun 12, 2009 6:17 pm

Very very nice!
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Re: Cliched water drops....

Postby mic on Fri Jun 12, 2009 10:17 pm

Just shows you doesn't it, it doesn't take all the bloody up to date whiz bang quater back flip with a turned pike to come up with brilliance like this.

Top notch !

Well done.

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Re: Cliched water drops....

Postby blacknstormy on Sat Jun 13, 2009 8:34 pm

great shots - I'm going to have to have a go at this sooner or later :)
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Re: Cliched water drops....

Postby johnmc on Sun Jun 14, 2009 12:58 am

Great shots! - I was going to give these same techniques a shot this weekend after Surenj pointed out that strobist article to me... here's hoping I can come close to yours ;)
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