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Not something I do that often, but had an enjoyable few hours this afternoon with some delightful models.

Got so many I can't even choose a favourite. Might have to get a hold of Professional Portraits software and have a go at a few of them.

This one is pretty much out of camera - just a few minor tweaks in raw and CS4.

As I have limited experience in this field would welcome some critique from those experienced in this type of photography and processing.

Comments welcome from others also.

beautiful gaze and expression. lovely soft lighting.
definitely lose the sunnies though. i'd also consider a slightly tighter crop on the top and right of frame.

Bob,

I'd like to see this cropped square, with the top of the image being somewhere around her forehead.

I'd also like to see a nudge more sat in this; pump the skin colours a little.

And speaking of colours, the wb may not be quite right. I think this one is a little too cool. Give this a little bit of a nudge towards the warmer side of the fence.

I have to agree with a tighter crop, and with gary about the cool colours....great work though, I'd be very happy to produce something this good...think it is time to go ask around for models and drag out the S5 Pro...I am almost finished my honours project so I will have a bit of time!

gstark wrote:Bob,

I'd like to see this cropped square, with the top of the image being somewhere around her forehead.

I'd also like to see a nudge more sat in this; pump the skin colours a little.

And speaking of colours, the wb may not be quite right. I think this one is a little too cool. Give this a little bit of a nudge towards the warmer side of the fence.

Will do Gary. Might need a couple of days before I can get at it.

OK - I had a little more time today to process another one of yesterday's model shoot pics.

I have absorbed the good feedback and tried to encompass those suggestions in this pic.

Would appreciate feedback on this second attempt.

perfect mate.

I quite like the original Bob but this is STUNNING..

Keep em comming..

Baz

absolute stunner there Bob!!!

A very attractive young lady, and the re make shot gets the from me.

drop-dead gorgeous; and the model is beautiful too.