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I think I'm getting there

PostPosted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 2:29 pm
by Bob G
Had another chance to go through some of the .raws from the model shoot last Sunday and chose this one to see if my processing skills with portraits are progressing.

So once again I'll expose myself to the scrutiny of the wise ones.

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Re: I think I'm getting there

PostPosted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 5:46 pm
by aim54x
Great stuff there Bob....I am going to have to tag along next time you shoot...maybe some of your quick learning ability will rub off....too bad your so far away

Re: I think I'm getting there

PostPosted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 7:45 pm
by Matt. K
Very nice work Bob! A professional shot in every way. If I could make 1 suggestion...there's a very slight colour cast in the white of her eyes...perhaps desaturating the whites slightly might improve the photograph?

Re: I think I'm getting there

PostPosted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 9:57 pm
by Bob G
Matt. K wrote:Very nice work Bob! A professional shot in every way. If I could make 1 suggestion...there's a very slight colour cast in the white of her eyes...perhaps desaturating the whites slightly might improve the photograph?

Will do just that before I print it - thanks.

Re: I think I'm getting there

PostPosted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 11:00 pm
by Bob G
Matt. K wrote:Very nice work Bob! A professional shot in every way. If I could make 1 suggestion...there's a very slight colour cast in the white of her eyes...perhaps desaturating the whites slightly might improve the photograph?


Ok I have whitened and sharpened the eyes a little.

Is this the improvement envisaged

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