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time to put up

PostPosted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 1:18 am
by firsty
I have been a bit slack, not posting much here although I visit fairly often... can we all say "lurker"

so without further ado

was out at eastern creek a few weeks ago taking shots of the bikes when I remembers some saying on this forum that "motor sport images are suppose to be over saturated and vibrant"

Have I gone to far
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I think yes :)

then for something different

it was a cloudy day, but the cloud bank stopped short of the horizon and during the last race of the sun dropped below the clouds just before it set and from where I was shooting I was looking straight into the sun and it was reflecting off the track... aahh moment... back lit near silhouette

metering of the track reflection to stop any blown highlights I started panning... black frame, black frame, black frame, front wheel in the glow, back wheel in the glow, black frame
it took about 10 panning burst before I caught a full bike in the glow and only managed two full images in about 100 frames before the race was over

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definitely something I will have to try again.

all comment and suggestions on ways to improve both these images is most appreciated

Re: time to put up

PostPosted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 2:27 am
by surenj
While I like the first, the second is an absolute corker!! Masterful!!

Re: time to put up

PostPosted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 8:12 am
by Mitchell
surenj wrote:the second is an absolute corker!!

couldn't agree more.

it was worth the repetition - the mood of this image is spot on.
nice work firsty!

Re: time to put up

PostPosted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 9:55 am
by colin_12
I think you have gone a bit far on the 1st.
The second is a fantastic effort.
Way to go firsty.

Re: time to put up

PostPosted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 10:51 am
by gstark
colin_12 wrote:I think you have gone a bit far on the 1st.
The second is a fantastic effort.
Way to go firsty.



:agree:

But it's fun trying, right? :)

Re: time to put up

PostPosted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 3:30 pm
by ozczecho
Legend....#2 is awesome/

Re: time to put up

PostPosted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 6:33 pm
by biggerry
Have I gone to far


if you have, its not by much imo - the image looks like a typical mag shot

The second image is great! a different take on motosport imagery and you have made it look easy! :up: top work.

Re: time to put up

PostPosted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 10:54 pm
by aim54x
I will have to be boring and say that the second is absolutely amazing!!

Re: time to put up

PostPosted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:35 am
by CraigVTR
# 2 is great well worth the effort.
#1 the saturation on the bike is great but I think the background is a little overpowering. If you desat the background a touch it will be just right.

Re: time to put up

PostPosted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 1:18 pm
by mikecarlotto
Both shots are great but I'd tone down the 1st a little. Top stuff!

Re: time to put up

PostPosted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 8:45 pm
by ian.bertram
I absolutely love your second image. It just makes me want to get back on a bike again. There's something evocative about the image that makes the rider look all alone in a world of their own. Have you thought about slightly cropping in? Probably not much but just enough to bring the bike in a little closer. A really nice effect and one I want to try myself.

Re: time to put up

PostPosted: Sun Jul 05, 2009 9:12 am
by methd
The second would be even more perfect if his knees were down :P