Sublime Panorama Revisited

Following on from my earlier attempts at a panorama, I have had another go.
This time I took the photo at a more reasonable hour, but it lacks the colours of the sunrise.
The upside was that I was able to control camera shake much better, and the picture is much sharper as a result.
Critique & suggestions for improvement more than welcome.
EDIT: Click through to bigger - 4400x800, about 900Kb

Even though it lacks punch - suggestions welcome - I had a go at printing it. That had challenges of its own.
My printer is a venerable Epson 1270, and although it has a roll paper option, I do not have the accessory, and am unlikely to find one, so I cut the paper roughly to size, and laid it out on the dining table, with the printer at one end, and a wooden ramp to catch the output. The final print is about 1800x300

Now for the challenge of framing it. The wood is easy, but glass and Mat board 2000mm long???
For future panos, I will have to work out a way of getting better colours in the print too. This one has come out a little darker than I would like. Clearly some test prints of relevant portions on the same paper are the way to go as I don't have any of the fancy gear to do this precisely. and printing the whole thing multiple times would be exorbitant - it used about a third of my colour cartridge so the total cost came to about $50 for the print. Again, suggestions welcome.
This time I took the photo at a more reasonable hour, but it lacks the colours of the sunrise.

The upside was that I was able to control camera shake much better, and the picture is much sharper as a result.
Critique & suggestions for improvement more than welcome.
EDIT: Click through to bigger - 4400x800, about 900Kb

Even though it lacks punch - suggestions welcome - I had a go at printing it. That had challenges of its own.
My printer is a venerable Epson 1270, and although it has a roll paper option, I do not have the accessory, and am unlikely to find one, so I cut the paper roughly to size, and laid it out on the dining table, with the printer at one end, and a wooden ramp to catch the output. The final print is about 1800x300

Now for the challenge of framing it. The wood is easy, but glass and Mat board 2000mm long???
For future panos, I will have to work out a way of getting better colours in the print too. This one has come out a little darker than I would like. Clearly some test prints of relevant portions on the same paper are the way to go as I don't have any of the fancy gear to do this precisely. and printing the whole thing multiple times would be exorbitant - it used about a third of my colour cartridge so the total cost came to about $50 for the print. Again, suggestions welcome.