I like no 1 and 4, just wonder how no 4 would look like if you crop it just above the concrete were the white panels start. Just like a pano with three picture frames. The first is a nice conversion love the lines. No 2 is well done but to busy for my taste.
Re: A few from Pyrmont minimeet
Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 10:17 am
by biggerry
I quite like 1 and two, patterns always appeal to me and the de-sat look works well on the first. I have to say, i completely missed the second one, where was that taken?
The last is very neat but agree that a crop would help isolate the windows, nice work on getting the exposure right for the stuff in the windows too! especially given the sun was in a nasty spot by the looks of it
Re: A few from Pyrmont minimeet
Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 10:44 am
by aim54x
I quite like the first, the juxtaposition of (what appears to be) stiff and rigid with the delicate and curved is great.
#2 is interesting as an abstract and would not stand out in a gallery, but #3 and #4 dont do much for me. Straighten #4 maybe?
Nice to see someone thinking outside of the square
Re: A few from Pyrmont minimeet
Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 10:56 am
by Willy wombat
Some nice patterns in that lot Matt
Re: A few from Pyrmont minimeet
Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 11:16 am
by jaff
(4) works for me, the angle of the foreground, the different images in the portals and even the pleasing combinations of colours......nice to see an everday ordinary thing presented artistically!
Re: A few from Pyrmont minimeet
Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 8:45 pm
by colin_12
You certainly look at things differently to me Matt. These make a great set.