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Bourke river boat

PostPosted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 11:13 am
by norwest
The Jandra. A 'paddle' river boat on the Darling at Bourke. The second shot was adjacent to the boat.

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Re: Bourke river boat

PostPosted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 12:46 pm
by surenj
While these are excellent technically, I feel there is something missing. Maybe there is too much symmetry? I am not sure how to improve.. Maybe change the angle of view so there is less symmetry... 2nd may benefit from a point of interest?

I'll be keen to see other comments.

Re: Bourke river boat

PostPosted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 12:17 am
by biggerry
Maybe change the angle of view so there is less symmetry... 2nd may benefit from a point of interest?


on the second image, maybe getting 'square on' with the bank and isolating a single tree as the main subject and going with the symmetry? Those reflections and that super still water are begging to be used!