Ange - Swimwear
Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 11:07 pm
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would have been nice on the third image.DSLRUsers.com
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Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 11:07 pmRe: Ange - Swimwear
Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 7:23 amVery nice work, the first one stands out.
A would have been nice on the third image.
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would have been nice on the third image.Re: Ange - Swimwear
Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 12:10 pmNice work!
The second one has a couple of hot spots (e.g. on her legs) and the patch of rock showing through between her right arm and her body at first glance looked like it might be a gold-ish accessory. Slight tweaks would improve it.
The second one has a couple of hot spots (e.g. on her legs) and the patch of rock showing through between her right arm and her body at first glance looked like it might be a gold-ish accessory. Slight tweaks would improve it.
Re: Ange - Swimwear
Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 7:25 pmJohn, These are indeed high quality as usual.
Who holds your softbox for you? esp in the third?
First is the strongest.
In the third, her expression seems to be in transition.
#4 I would be getting her to move the left leg slightly to her left (or you moving to your left) so that the left ankle covers her bottom (Can see the white bikini etc). But then I am nitpicking.
Who holds your softbox for you? esp in the third?
First is the strongest.
In the third, her expression seems to be in transition.
#4 I would be getting her to move the left leg slightly to her left (or you moving to your left) so that the left ankle covers her bottom (Can see the white bikini etc). But then I am nitpicking.
Re: Ange - Swimwear
Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 12:22 amsurenj wrote:John, These are indeed high quality as usual.
Who holds your softbox for you? esp in the third?
First is the strongest.
In the third, her expression seems to be in transition.
#4 I would be getting her to move the left leg slightly to her left (or you moving to your left) so that the left ankle covers her bottom (Can see the white bikini etc). But then I am nitpicking.
Thanks surenj...
All shots were natural light (I'm pretty sure), apart from the 3rd... and for this shot, I held my flash myself in my left hand, attached by the SC-29 to my camera. It had a Lightsphere on it, but no softbox
You're not the first one to raise the last point, The white is her shirt which was over her bikini... In addition to that I thought I could get away with it due to the shallow DOF...