ZooFriends....my first visit on my annual pass

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ZooFriends....my first visit on my annual pass

Postby aim54x on Tue Sep 29, 2009 12:37 am

I just thought I would get some feedback on some of the images that I took today at the Taronga. All were taken using my 70-200VR (on my D300) and are unprocessed.

Bird with a feather
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Too Cool - this may be a bit bright...will have to check on a few more monitors before I make that call
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Baby play time - I know have cut off the hoofs a bit...
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Snow Leopard - probably cropped too tight...resizing looks to have detracted from the sharpness as well
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Any comments are greatly appreciated...esp if anyone has tips for shooting (did I say that...i meant photographing not hunting) these animals.
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Re: ZooFriends....my first visit on my annual pass

Postby surenj on Tue Sep 29, 2009 1:39 am

Nicely done Cameron.

I quite like the bird for it's composition and humor..

I am not sure about the sharpness as you have stated that there is no post processing. In the same vein, the colors are stronger on the rock and foliage on camera left to the leopard. Nothing that can't be fixed in post.

Yes, the meerkat is overexposed looking. You don't need another monitor, just look at the histogram in your camera or Lightroom/capture NX... That will give you a fair idea of the exposure in general
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Re: ZooFriends....my first visit on my annual pass

Postby aim54x on Tue Sep 29, 2009 11:09 am

Funny enough, the meerkat now looks fine on this monitor....too many uncalibrated monitors, i'll have to check the histogram although i would be expecting a shift towards overexposure due to the subject matter (bright subject on bright background).
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Re: ZooFriends....my first visit on my annual pass

Postby surenj on Tue Sep 29, 2009 11:33 am

On the same monitor in which the meetkat is fine, how do the other photos in this series look? :idea:
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Re: ZooFriends....my first visit on my annual pass

Postby Glen on Tue Sep 29, 2009 12:12 pm

Cameron big fan of your Meerkat, it is a classic shot and the tones seem to work. PS The Zoo Friends is a great deal!
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Re: ZooFriends....my first visit on my annual pass

Postby LaurieE on Tue Sep 29, 2009 12:51 pm

the meerkat is my favorite - a fun pose with a lot of character.
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Re: ZooFriends....my first visit on my annual pass

Postby surenj on Tue Sep 29, 2009 1:32 pm

Cameron do they allow flash to be used??

Just looked at the annual pass prices ($110) and what a bargain! Once you go three times, the cost is covered. :violin:
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Re: ZooFriends....my first visit on my annual pass

Postby aim54x on Tue Sep 29, 2009 1:58 pm

I didnt use a flash, i dont think there is too much of a restriction in those terms as plenty of people were using flash around me. PS. the other images look fine...it could just be viewing the image on my aging uncalibrated Acer whilst sitting in a dim room (great for games).
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Re: ZooFriends....my first visit on my annual pass

Postby biggerry on Tue Sep 29, 2009 2:33 pm

Gotta love that Meerkat, a different take on a very photographed animal. I really like the expression and pose, almost like he/she is resting before all the kids turn up and throw things at them :roll:

The two little babies is great, as you already identified, the hooves is an issue, however I would consider going in for a much tighter crop to isolate them from the BG, their surrounds do no favours in this image so might as well crop it out imo.

At least you got to see the snow leopard! :up:
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Re: ZooFriends....my first visit on my annual pass

Postby pwoo on Tue Sep 29, 2009 3:24 pm

I like #2 and #3. #2 look fine on my monitor and love the colour, the first 3 thoughts that come to mind when I saw it were Lion King, Africa and the channel Ten documentary.

#3 is just so lovely, my kids would have love it.

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Re: ZooFriends....my first visit on my annual pass

Postby aim54x on Wed Sep 30, 2009 12:03 am

Just had a look at the histogram and had a play with the NEF in Capture NX2...looks like it is really about 0.5-0.7 stops over but since the general consensus is that it is alright then I guess it is not that bad.
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Re: ZooFriends....my first visit on my annual pass

Postby surenj on Wed Sep 30, 2009 1:02 am

Very interesting Cameron, it must be my monitor then! I think the combination of lighter tones and mild over exposure makes it look even more bright.

The more I look at the meerkat, the more I like it!! :cheers:
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Re: ZooFriends....my first visit on my annual pass

Postby gstark on Wed Sep 30, 2009 7:28 am

The meerkat image image is almost dying for a caption. Something like "what a day I've had", or "I'm bushed". :)

With respect to Gerry, I don't think that there's enough of the second baby in that shot for it to work as a crop. Ultra cute though.

These are all good images Cameron, and I know that we're all looking forward to seing the results of your repeated use of your newly acquired pass.
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