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...... not my usual subject

Postby big pix on Thu Oct 08, 2009 12:14 am

...... 5 months old..... and the tight crop was requested, all 3 shot available light

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Re: ...... not my usual subject

Postby gstark on Thu Oct 08, 2009 7:56 am

Bernie,

The first of these is magic. Great feeling of life and activity; clearly a bright bouncing baby.

I'd like to see the wb adjusted in the second; it looks to me to be way too cool, and could do with some warming up. Use the colouration within the numbers on the child's clothing as your guide here. It should be much closer to a pure white, which is what you have in the other two images.
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Postby Reschsmooth on Thu Oct 08, 2009 8:13 am

For a subject not your usual, you have done a great job. Accepting Gary's comments about WB, I actually think the cool WB in the second adds to the image, surprisingly given that I would normally associate baby photos with warmer tones. Your use of light and capture of the expression, particularly in the second, is great.
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Postby big pix on Thu Oct 08, 2009 6:34 pm

thanks..... Reschsmooth.... and I agree Gary, the second image is a tad cold..... all fixed before I gave the images to my son, who is quite fussy re images...... and yes the little fellow is my gandson :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
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Postby gstark on Thu Oct 08, 2009 7:39 pm

big pix wrote: and yes the little fellow is my gandson


Thank goodness for that. I was beginning to worry that he might have been mine. :rotfl2:
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Re: ...... not my usual subject

Postby big pix on Thu Oct 08, 2009 7:41 pm

gstark wrote:
big pix wrote: and yes the little fellow is my gandson


Thank goodness for that. I was beginning to worry that he might have been mine. :rotfl2:


.......naaaaaa ...... the little fellow has more hair :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
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Re: ...... not my usual subject

Postby gstark on Thu Oct 08, 2009 8:14 pm

big pix wrote:
gstark wrote:
big pix wrote: and yes the little fellow is my gandson


Thank goodness for that. I was beginning to worry that he might have been mine. :rotfl2:


.......naaaaaa ...... the little fellow has more hair :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:


And is waaaaayyyyyyy better looking.
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Re: ...... not my usual subject

Postby big pix on Thu Oct 08, 2009 8:22 pm

....... gary i can only agree

here is a re-work on image 1.....
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