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Lonely Looking Sky

PostPosted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 6:25 am
by Mr Darcy
I posted one version of this here, but I was not happy with it.
Here are a few more attempts. Also, I am inspired by KillaKoala to throw open the PP to the group. To this end, I am also supplying a full size, OOC(unretouched) JPG and the NEF. As with Killa, I reserve copyright.

The original:
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Darker as per Gary's Suggestion:
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An almost workable attempt to keep the colour in the glider. Previous attempts were ditched:
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Full size images
http://www.swtd.com.au/images/GJK/_GJK2789.JPG
http://www.swtd.com.au/images/GJK/_GJK2789.NEF

Re: Lonely Looking Sky

PostPosted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 1:35 pm
by chrisk
greg, i really like the PP in #2. the noise and darkness you created looks ominous and surreal. i really like it.

Re: Lonely Looking Sky

PostPosted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 11:01 pm
by surenj
My take,

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Re: Lonely Looking Sky

PostPosted: Thu Oct 15, 2009 11:18 pm
by biggerry
wow surenj, that rework is awesome...i also will chain you down and get the steps out of you for that one! That image could easily pass as one of those GFC advert images or similiar - ie 'getting thru troubled times',

Greg, I reckon you last BW rework is a winner, some where in the middle always seem to work... this version conveys that ominous feel quite well.