Peruse some Portraits of Pip
Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 10:08 amApparently an alliteration area awaits 
C&C appreciated
C&C appreciated
love #3 though ... its a beauty
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Peruse some Portraits of Pip
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Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 10:08 amRe: Peruse some Portraits of Pip
Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 10:44 amthe glasses through the eyes on #1 and the brief glimpse of her top detract from it i reckon ..
love #3 though ... its a beauty
love #3 though ... its a beauty
Re: Peruse some Portraits of Pip
Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 1:54 pmThe first and last are great! The first one i reckon just cropping above the dress would make for a very alluring shot 
top stuff..
top stuff..
Re: Peruse some Portraits of Pip
Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 5:22 pmI I agree with Big Red
2 Do not like the dress maybe a crop and some pp would make this one better
3 a great shot
2 Do not like the dress maybe a crop and some pp would make this one better
3 a great shot
Re: Peruse some Portraits of Pip
Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 9:19 pmVery nice work. i have to agree with what has already been said, the first is definitely the strongest, a great portrait, the softness coupled with the glasses really pulling your attention to the eyes (a crop would be nice as well). The second is a bit strange, I dont like the bare feet and am unsure about what to do with this one. The third, whilst nice is a bit boring, maybe a tighter crop? Very nice lighting in the 3rd though.
Re: Peruse some Portraits of Pip
Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 10:06 pmI love your use of light in the last shot. They are all excellent images.
Re: Peruse some Portraits of Pip
Posted: Sat Oct 24, 2009 7:39 amThanks for the coments all 
The critique is much appreciated
The critique is much appreciatedRe: Peruse some Portraits of Pip
Posted: Sat Oct 24, 2009 10:20 amDavid
Glasses notwithstanding, #1 is the standout here for me. The lighting is superb, you've got lovely dreamy out of focus areas and Pip is nice and sharp. The strong eye contact and natural expression round things out well.
Glasses notwithstanding, #1 is the standout here for me. The lighting is superb, you've got lovely dreamy out of focus areas and Pip is nice and sharp. The strong eye contact and natural expression round things out well.