A quick snap of my axe

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A quick snap of my axe

Postby jcabrera on Fri Oct 30, 2009 12:54 am

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Re: A quick snap of my axe

Postby gstark on Fri Oct 30, 2009 8:54 am

The warm, rich tones in the wood make this a very nice image.

But I'm struggling to find where your point of focus is. There doesn't seem to be - to me - any one area where there is a really sharp area in the image. I suspect it may be the saddles on the bridge, but I cannot tell.

I'd like to see this reshot, but with greater depth of field, and perhaps a few different versions of it, trying different points of focus
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Re: A quick snap of my axe

Postby hellman on Fri Oct 30, 2009 11:11 am

I'm with gstark. Straight away my eyes went on the search for the focus point (possibly the pickup).
I'd also suggest shooting it again with a greater depth of field. With a bit of mucking around you could still blur the fret board but I would like to see the whole guitar in focus.
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Re: A quick snap of my axe

Postby jcabrera on Fri Oct 30, 2009 12:32 pm

thanks for the comments guys. The bridge is the focus point, I've got a few more shots that I might upload when I get home
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Re: A quick snap of my axe

Postby gstark on Fri Oct 30, 2009 1:14 pm

jcabrera wrote:I've got a few more shots that I might upload when I get home


Please do; we have lots of musicians here - and a few drummers too, I suspect - and I for one would love to see what else you've done.
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Re: A quick snap of my axe

Postby aim54x on Fri Oct 30, 2009 9:29 pm

I love the colours...but i wont repeat what others have already said.

Would love to see more of your work though
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Re: A quick snap of my axe

Postby surenj on Sat Oct 31, 2009 3:00 pm

I would prefer the yellow specular highlight moved. It draws the eye towards it and it's placed in a non interesting area.

This is a difficult a subject to photograph as it's very reflective.
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Re: A quick snap of my axe

Postby Matt. K on Sat Oct 31, 2009 9:45 pm

You chop wood with that??? :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock:
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Re: A quick snap of my axe

Postby jcabrera on Sun Nov 01, 2009 1:55 pm

Matt. K wrote:You chop wood with that??? :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock:


if U think I could chop wood with this, then maybe I do. :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock:
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Re: A quick snap of my axe

Postby hellman on Sun Nov 01, 2009 4:37 pm

Bottom two look better. Would still prefer more DOF. The roof lights in the reflection are a bit of a distraction and although it is a nice warm, I might cool it a touch with some white balance to tweak the yellow tinge down.

Liking these axe pics though, so keep em coming.
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Re: A quick snap of my axe

Postby gstark on Sun Nov 01, 2009 5:39 pm

The extra images are much better.

In the second, showing us the same image with a slightly wider field of view - to show us some more of the body below the tremolo arm but keeping everything else exactly as you have it - would be what I would be aiming to go for here.

Thanks for adding the extra images; these are nice images, and I do like the warm tones that you've used.

An ESP?
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Re: A quick snap of my axe

Postby jcabrera on Sun Nov 01, 2009 7:48 pm

gstark wrote:The extra images are much better.

In the second, showing us the same image with a slightly wider field of view - to show us some more of the body below the tremolo arm but keeping everything else exactly as you have it - would be what I would be aiming to go for here.

Thanks for adding the extra images; these are nice images, and I do like the warm tones that you've used.

An ESP?


Thanks gstark, it's a tough one due to its strong reflection of the lights, and yes its a ESP
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