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tulip

Postby zafra52 on Sun Nov 15, 2009 11:56 am

I took this week's picture last Sunday, sadly the flower
is not more for it withered and went to flower heaven.
I was trying different apertures to blur the background
and make it compliment the subject.
You'd be the judge if I succeeded.

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Re: tulip

Postby Geoff M on Sun Nov 15, 2009 12:48 pm

I think you have pretty much succseeded with this. The depth of field suits the subject and the b/g is clean and without distraction from the bloom. Exquisite colour too, tulips don't grow too well in these parts.
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Re: tulip

Postby wendellt on Sun Nov 15, 2009 1:44 pm

i like the quirky tilt of the flower
and great bokeh
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Re: tulip

Postby zafra52 on Sun Nov 15, 2009 1:58 pm

Thank you. I took a few shots.
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Re: tulip

Postby Marvin on Sun Nov 15, 2009 6:26 pm

I think you have succeeded too. I really like it!
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Re: tulip

Postby Wink on Sun Nov 15, 2009 9:57 pm

I like it.

Maybe you could try cloning out the tiny black dots from the petals.
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Re: tulip

Postby DebT on Mon Nov 16, 2009 7:38 pm

agree with wink, this beautiful soft delicate flower would look so much nicer without the insect bites
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Re: tulip

Postby zafra52 on Tue Nov 17, 2009 6:50 pm

The blank spots is in fact the pollen of the flower. I thought of removing the black dots, but then again I quite liked the inperfection.
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Re: tulip

Postby surenj on Wed Nov 18, 2009 5:27 pm

Zafra, I suggest trying different placement of the tulip within the frame. Maybe include a little more negative space.
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Re: tulip

Postby zafra52 on Fri Nov 20, 2009 8:59 pm

Thank you for the suggestion surenj. I will try next time.
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