Crane through windows

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Crane through windows

Postby ATJ on Sun Dec 13, 2009 3:50 pm

Here are shots of the same crane shot through three different windows in the guardhouse on Cockatoo.

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Re: Crane through windows

Postby surenj on Sun Dec 13, 2009 4:32 pm

Nice framing here Andrew. I prefer the one without the bars.

Did you consider BW?

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Re: Crane through windows

Postby zafra52 on Sun Dec 13, 2009 6:52 pm

I also prefer the last colour one. The B&W has lost quite a lot of details.
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Re: Crane through windows

Postby wendellt on Sun Dec 13, 2009 8:06 pm

nice one
the black and white one really shows the delicate composition
i like how you have included the little shed bottom left in the frame
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Re: Crane through windows

Postby biggerry on Mon Dec 14, 2009 3:22 pm

+1 for the BW version, great composition but the colour just does not do it justice!
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Re: Crane through windows

Postby ATJ on Mon Dec 14, 2009 3:45 pm

Only the black and white version isn't mine - well it was my image but not my conversion. I don't particularly like black and white and wouldn't have chosen it - even though it appears more other people (2:1) prefer it.
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Re: Crane through windows

Postby aim54x on Mon Dec 14, 2009 10:04 pm

I like the colour version more....as already said there is too much detail lost in the conversion.
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Re: Crane through windows

Postby biggerry on Mon Dec 14, 2009 10:10 pm

it appears more other people (2:1) prefer it.


well at the end of the day it really comes down to what you like and if that is the coloour version then thats OK :up: :up:

lookign at the votes, it now 2 for 2 with cams addition : 8) 8)
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Re: Crane through windows

Postby surenj on Tue Dec 15, 2009 12:23 am

Love the divide between BW and colour. I like them both but tried to differentiate between the actual subject of the photo versus the pseudo frame... 8)

[Andrew I hope you don't mind me converting your image? I didn't ask for permission intially!, Let me know]
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Re: Crane through windows

Postby zafra52 on Tue Dec 15, 2009 7:03 am

That's a very good point surenj on a sensitive issue. They are people that do mind having their babies altered. I am not sure if there is a protocol/rule to deal with it. I know there is/was a member with a caption saying "do not alter my pictures".
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Re: Crane through windows

Postby biggerry on Tue Dec 15, 2009 9:08 am

on a sensitive issue. They are people that do mind having their babies altered.


Several people explicitly mention in their sig if they do not want their image altered, if you have a real issue with it, be explicit and put it there - in my opinion if someone takes the time out to critique and even re-edit your image its all good, especially given they are giving their time and effort for...free. :up:
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Re: Crane through windows

Postby zafra52 on Tue Dec 15, 2009 9:44 am

I agree with you, Biggerry. Perhaps, we should encourage this as the general practice. All images can be edited; unless otherwise signed. But perhaps the edited image should be accompanied by a disclosure like "Edited by ..." to avoid embarrasing confusions like above. An Smily with a sign Do not edit could be a help here, if there is such a thing. It is only a suggestion. :agree:
Personally, if some takes the time and trouble to show me how to improve my picture I would take it as a favour. PS Perhaps I read between the lines what it wasn't there and we should forget the issue.
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