Thanks for your detailed feedback Zafra and Gerry,.
biggerry wrote:The use of the two off camera lights are very nice, I really like the last with the barn-door light in the shot, very pop boy band style...the light flares are great and really suit this image style, probably one of those things which you could try for ages and not get!
There were three lights Gerry. Look carefully....
The flare came by mistake and I just incorporated it into the shoot. We didn't have much of a background so this was the best I could make out of it.
biggerry wrote:I also like the sharp lines in the roof (just wire?), they really come out with the flash and definitely add to teh image!
yes. It's a clothing line!!
biggerry wrote:been better if it included the whole foot,
I didn't chimp these at the time. I just kept shooting once I got the lights sorted (which took a while
btw). This goes to show that chimping around is good for you. Lesson learnt. Retrospectively, I could have aimed one of the lights to get more detail on the sole of the shoe.
zafra52 wrote:I find you can do without the beam going through the head of your subject and the bright light on the top right edge a bit distracting perhaps you could tone it down a bit to advert distraction.
Fair call Zafra. Sometimes one can get lost in the extra effects and forget the subject!
zafra52 wrote:, I guess you don't know your subject well or at all
I do know the subject quite well. I have no chance of attracting strangers to do photoshoots like this. He was carrying half the equipment and helping setup as well. People are not kind to you when you are setting up your stuff. "Are we done yet?"
zafra52 wrote:I find also a bit distracting the bubles on the hand of the last picture, but I cannot offer any suggestion
This was unintended but I thought I'd show it incase someone wanted to replicate this effect. You just need salty sea spray on your front element.
zafra52 wrote: PS. Would you mind telling us the lens you used?
It's the Canon 10-22. The exifs are all intact Zafra.
I can confirm that none of my lenses are good at focusing in the dark. Probably partly the camera and partly just physics. ? Ideas?