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Aged Machine

PostPosted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 5:20 pm
by stubbsy
This image is one I'm quite pleased with, but it almost made the scrap heap (if you don't like what I've done please say so - I appreciate all feedback - in fact feel free to offer up your take on the shot - clicking the original image takes you to a larger version).

So anyway I was quite interested in this particular piece of equipment on the Cockatoo Island shoot, but the light was bad and I was damned if I could get the white balance right. I came back to the shot several times and played with it to no avail. Finally one step before I deleted it I decided to have a go at a black & white treatment. Despite never having intended this as a monochrome (well sepia toned) shot I'm happy with the result.

This is the original image

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and this is the final version

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Re: Aged Machine

PostPosted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 5:49 pm
by devilla101
Very nice processing Peter. The final image makes the machinery more nostalgic and more 'at home'.

Re: Aged Machine

PostPosted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 6:19 pm
by rflower
I like what you have done with this Peter. The lighting conditions certainly look harsh in the original shot. The result looks like you took a photo of print made 100 years ago, and I think it looks great.

Re: Aged Machine

PostPosted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 7:19 pm
by zafra52
The second is more exciting, visually. You introduced grain, made it monocromatic and added vigneting. I like it!

Re: Aged Machine

PostPosted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 7:53 pm
by phillipb
:agree: with what's been said so far, I would even try a little more sepia.