These images are sad. Why? Because they remind me of a sad time.
You see, after going to Italy in 2000 and seeing the machines for sale in the shops in Rome, we liked the idea.
So back home we did the research, lucked on to a shop in Melbourne and bought one. A beautiful machine it was, faithfully served us, for about 6 months. Then the mount on the top right where the steam comes out, developed a leak. So we sent it back to Melbourne for warranty repair. Emptied all the water out of it, wrapped it very carefully, and sent it through a courier.
It took weeks, but we finally got our machine back. This is where the problems started... They might have repaired the steam mount on the boiler, I don't know. We didn't get a chance to turn it on. They'd shipped it back to us wrapped in plastic, and half full of water. Of course the water had escaped, but for some reason it seems the plastic had caused a reaction with the varnish on the lovely shiny brass metal all over the unit, it would wipe off on your finger like goo. And the boiler had a dent in it that wasn't there when we sent it. This led to a long (months) and unhappy time while we fought our case with them, finally getting a full refund. A happy ending, but one that I dare not risk again, so unfortunately the beautiful Lapavoni lever machine will never have a place in our home. We were without a machine for a long time, finally could not handle the "i" word (insss insstsa... Nup, just can't say it) any longer, bought a cheapish machine.
Here. That was retired when I knew enough about coffee to know I wasn't drinking coffee as good as it can be. Then we resolved our coffee problems with
this.
OK, enough of my story telling.
Image 1 has nice lighting, though the feature of that image is the machine. It needs a location to show it off without the distractions of the yellow wall. The depth of field works well to make the sink action more in the background.
That fist in image 2 is such a distraction, did he have to be holding that handle when you took that image?
I've seen some fantastic action shots of the naked PF, unfortunately this is not one of them, not least of which is because of the very strong white behind it. It needs a direct flash to highlight that lovely stripey crema that oozes when it's done right.
And I agree, the drip that is on the lip of the glass and running down the outside makes the image messy.
Sorry, these images don't do it for me. I hope you find the critique you get from them encouraging enough to give it another go, an excellent subject for some fine photography when done right, good luck.