Getting your lights nearer the track is a good idea.
However, some things to note.
1. Check your sync speed. Most cameras will not synch at 1/500 (D70 is an exception) Even if it will handle it on paper, it is a good idea to do some tests.
2 Your second photo does not appear to be lit by your on-camera flash. Look at the shadow. The light is coming from camera right. You may be too far away for your flash to be having much of an effect, or maybe it did not fire at all. This would explain why many of your shots are underexposed. You may have "borrowed" someone elses light.
The SB600 is not good for distance photography. its zoom stops at 85mm. The SB900 goes to 200mm This gets more light where you want it. You can boost the range using a fresnel lens, but it is much easier to use another flash.
If you do go to off camera flash, you will need an SB900 (or 800) on camera to act as controller, then another one or two flashes trackside in slave
mode. Go down early to set up & test. Even the night before for testing. Choose your spot to photograph & work out the best settings. Set this manually on both camera and flash & wait for your moment.
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Strobist for detailed ideas. I am sure David has covered this sort of thing thoroughly.
Another ($$$) idea is to get a camera that is good in low light & go for available lighting.