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Angels on the Stair (NSFW)

PostPosted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 11:01 pm
by leek
A concept shot I did with Angel last weekend...

Thoughts?

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Re: Angels on the Stair (NSFW)

PostPosted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 6:51 am
by Bindii
I dunno.. The concept seems good but I'm thinking you should have reversed it.. with her dressed at the top of the stairs and nude at the bottom..(where you would have the most impact).. and speaking of the top of the stairs I would be shooting so as to crop/lose that bright patch of light.. the staircase looks much for effective without it there.. :)

Re: Angels on the Stair (NSFW)

PostPosted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 5:58 pm
by Big V
Ditto the excellent suggestions Bindi has made.

Re: Angels on the Stair (NSFW)

PostPosted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 1:16 am
by Big Red
I like the concept of her stripping as she walk away [it is more teasing] but would suggest the clothes be a more prominent colour so you can see them better and perhaps have her so she looks like she has walked up and "looks back to suggest you follow her" type thing.