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Fisherman fixing his net - image updated

PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 10:43 pm
by tommyg
Been having a play with CS4 and some photos from our recent overseas trip, interested what your thoughts are on this;

The starting image;
Image

First conversion of the background to B&W;
Image

A little more refinement, leaving a little colour in the background, and having the net colour stay;
Image

Cheers
Tom

Re: Fisherman fixing his net

PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 11:37 pm
by Geoff
A lovely Candid!
Thanks for sharing.
I think this could make a nice B&W conversion as well.

Re: Fisherman fixing his net

PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 12:09 am
by tommyg
I did a full B&W, but thought it lost a little, so have tried with just the background switched to B&W, although not fully happy with the changing of the colour of the net - working on that though :)

Re: Fisherman fixing his net

PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 10:34 pm
by colin_12
I agree the net would look better with full colour. It would really make this shot with the backgound work you have done.

Re: Fisherman fixing his net

PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 10:39 pm
by Alex
Excellent candid portrait. I love the framing.

Alex

Re: Fisherman fixing his net - image updated

PostPosted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 12:16 am
by tommyg
Had a bit more of a play to add the colours in the net back into the image ... does this add to the image do you think?

Thanks for the comments

Re: Fisherman fixing his net - image updated

PostPosted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 7:35 am
by Mr Darcy
tommyg wrote:does this add to the image do you think?

Without being able to see the original, I can't comment
If you make some changes and ask "Is this better", put in a second image with the changes, rather than replace the first.
You are allowed up to four images in a post, and mods turn a blind eye if there is a good reason for more Also, the framing, while I understand the reason, makes the image smaller, and harder to judge

I like this image though.As others have said, excellent framing.

Re: Fisherman fixing his net - image updated

PostPosted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 8:04 am
by gstark
Mr Darcy wrote:You are allowed up to four images in a post, and mods turn a blind eye if there is a good reason for more


In fact, where there's a genuine reason, it would be encouraged. Where there's a change in processing, or an illustration of a technique, we recognise and accept that four images may often be restrictive. The four image guidelines mostly apply with images posted simply for critique; it's difficult to view and offer honest and worthwhile critique on more than four images at any time.

Re: Fisherman fixing his net - image updated

PostPosted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 12:03 pm
by tommyg
That's what happens when you are playing with these things at midnight - I did add the 2 works originally, but then turned the computer off before I pressed submit - my Sony!

After reading the comments though, I thought I'd also add the original unedited version of the work as a comparison

Cheers
Tom