Bubbles at night

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Bubbles at night

Postby tommyg on Fri Apr 02, 2010 4:18 pm

Some of the photos from the 'Pizza at Debs' night (brilliant Pizza!)

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A 'Self portrait' :)
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And, finally check out the reflections in the right bubble :)
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As always C&C appreciated

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Re: Bubbles at night

Postby aim54x on Fri Apr 02, 2010 8:09 pm

Great work, I love the definition and the colours you have in these

How did you capture these? Long exposure on tripod with flashes used to light up the bubbles?
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Re: Bubbles at night

Postby tommyg on Fri Apr 02, 2010 9:17 pm

aim54x wrote:Great work, I love the definition and the colours you have in these

How did you capture these? Long exposure on tripod with flashes used to light up the bubbles?


Thanks for that. We had a bubble machine blowing these into the air, so it was done hand-held with an SB-900 at around 1/80, f5. Most were either out of focus or missed the bubbles completely.

Next time, I think I'll try with 2 side flashes to see if this gives something different
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Re: Bubbles at night

Postby DanielA on Fri Apr 02, 2010 9:31 pm

I was wondering where everyone's bubble shots were.
Looks like you did well. I had the same trouble with focus.

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Re: Bubbles at night

Postby Geoff M on Sat Apr 03, 2010 4:49 pm

The black point needs to be increased in these which should reduce the noise which is evident in the black b/g. Otherwise a good effort for a challenging subject.
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Re: Bubbles at night

Postby DanielA on Sat Apr 03, 2010 9:20 pm

In addition to the black point, some mild cropping could be work a try. Have you done any cropping on these?
I'd try cropping the first one square, keeping the full height, but just chopping a little bit of the left of the second bubble in from the left. :? Does that make sense?

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Re: Bubbles at night

Postby tommyg on Sun Apr 04, 2010 12:37 am

updated the links - images looked fine on red bubble - and at this size the blacks look black finally

Will do some boosting of the colour though as well and see how that goes
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Re: Bubbles at night

Postby amashun1 on Sun Apr 04, 2010 5:17 pm

amazing pics, love them all
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Re: Bubbles at night

Postby biggerry on Mon Apr 05, 2010 10:46 am

nioce! the third one is very tidy indeed.

the question does beg to be asked though, what were a bunch of grownups doing playing with a bubble machine :rotfl2:

would have been fun though!
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Re: Bubbles at night

Postby surenj on Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:35 am

Love the concept and execution! Personally I would have preferred larger light sources but love the color to remain.

biggerry wrote:bunch of grownups doing playing with a bubble machine

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Re: Bubbles at night

Postby Mr Darcy on Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:00 pm

biggerry wrote:the question does beg to be asked though, what were a bunch of grownups doing playing with a bubble machine

I seem to recall that you "can tell the difference between men and boys by the price of their toys"
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Re: Bubbles at night

Postby biggerry on Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:01 pm

I seem to recall that you "can tell the difference between men and boys by the price of their toys"


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Re: Bubbles at night

Postby fozzie on Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:22 pm

Tom,

I like the third shot most of all, quote 'A 'Self portrait' :)' unquote amazing colours and of course the photog's reflection.
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