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Eurika!

Postby zafra52 on Sun Apr 18, 2010 12:49 pm

As you can see below trick photography is not
really my forte. I saw something similar in a
book I borrowed from my local library and
although it did not explain how to do it I
decided to give it a go...

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Re: Eurika!

Postby DaveB on Sun Apr 18, 2010 1:44 pm

Nice idea! A couple of suggestions if I may:

Try giving the candle a colour closer to the skin, so as the viewer's attention moves along the finger it takes them longer to realise it's become a candle.

Your JPEG file is in Adobe RGB (1998): you should convert the copy of your image to sRGB IEC61966-2.1 before saving as a JPEG for the web, to give it the best change of getting reasonable colours on most viewers' screens.

Because of the automatic resizing that happens here, I try to keep my images to a maximum of 760px to avoid it: it keeps the final result much sharper.

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Re: Eurika!

Postby zafra52 on Sun Apr 18, 2010 3:37 pm

Thanks Dave. I'll work on your advice.
I made some changes with my limited PS knowledge. The changes:

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Re: Eurika!

Postby Big V on Sun Apr 18, 2010 5:58 pm

I would also try a slightly tighter crop as all of the black on the right is not adding anything to the pic.
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Re: Eurika!

Postby zafra52 on Sun Apr 18, 2010 6:23 pm

Thanks Big V.

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Re: Eurika!

Postby sirhc55 on Sun Apr 18, 2010 7:05 pm

Nice concept. Remember, if you are an ass scratcher - DON’T :wink:
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Re: Eurika!

Postby surenj on Sun Apr 18, 2010 8:29 pm

Nicely done! :cheers:

How about doing another version with a white background, silhoutted finger and yellow flame which illuminates just the top of the finger?
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Re: Eurika!

Postby Killakoala on Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:37 pm

Whilst probably getting far away from your original image, I think a larger flame would make it look even better.
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