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Just a bit of practice and fun to share

Nice concept & reasonable execution.
I'd take the houses right to silhouette. In particular the bright dot near the centre, and the "tail" coming out of the helmet. It would be nice if the line of the houses were cleaner too. I see a ghost fringe on it.

Nice concept and framing. In addition to what's being said, I would clean up the light on the left lower of the frame.