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The Header and the haircut
Posted:
Wed May 05, 2010 1:29 pm
by TC
Re: The Header and the haircut
Posted:
Wed May 05, 2010 2:41 pm
by Mr Darcy
I find your background distracting in all these shots. Also, you are too far from the action. #2 could be a corker except for these two issues.
Some options:
Crop harder
Shoot with a wider aperture
Get closer
Use a longer lens
Get lower so you are shooting against the sky.
Choose a different spot so you have a blander background
With #1 try cropping vertically. Lose the player to the left. He doesn't contribute to the shot. And the Pole to the right.
The Header and the haircut
Posted:
Thu May 06, 2010 7:54 am
by kiwi
What gerleaf you using tc ?
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Re: The Header and the haircut
Posted:
Thu May 06, 2010 9:31 am
by TC
gerleaf? if you mean gear?
D700, 70-200VRII and TC1.7 II
Re: The Header and the haircut
Posted:
Thu May 06, 2010 10:26 am
by kiwi
ahh yeah, silly iPhone
I have that gear myself if you swap the d700 for a d3
Its OK for soccer, but you do have to wait until the action comes close, I cant see your EXIF but at say 5.6 the DOF is becoming a bit too much for good subject isolation unless they are right on top of you
Good shots though - but as said crop tighter
Re: The Header and the haircut
Posted:
Fri May 07, 2010 6:28 pm
by Big V
The second shot is a cracker - brings tears to your eyes