Project - Brides #3

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Project - Brides #3

Postby iposiniditos on Tue Jun 29, 2010 8:00 am

hello everyone,

this is the third part of this: http://dslrusers.com/viewtopic.php?f=18&t=39280.

thank you for your comments as always,
theodoros :)

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Re: Project - Brides #3

Postby Ant on Tue Jun 29, 2010 2:07 pm

This is my favourite set of the series so far. Lovely images
#2 The wooden legs are a little distracting and I cant help but wonder what her veil is caught onl
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Re: Project - Brides #3

Postby Matt. K on Tue Jun 29, 2010 6:12 pm

The images to me seem to indicate that you got a beautiful location and a beautiful model/bride....but you just didn't know what to do with her. The poses seem forced and awkward and don't compliment the subject in her environment. The composition in image #2 is very awkward with the veil leading the eye directly out of the image space. I would have liked to have seen her more animated...perhaps twirling or dancing or running. There should have been more of a narrative or story. Why is she in the woods? Perhaps some other props...a bottle of bubbly or a borzoi dog or a bouquet of flowers would have helped lift them up?
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Re: Project - Brides #3

Postby wendellt on Tue Jun 29, 2010 6:38 pm

i like your aesthetic taste and the execution of the images
although i think the first one is the only one with real value because from her expression and other contextual clues like the forrest it portrays a sense of wonderment, the emotion of this image makes it the best

i feel though the others are just derrivates of the concept

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Re: Project - Brides #3

Postby surenj on Tue Jun 29, 2010 7:08 pm

Pretty amazing location, light etc! :cheers:

As already mentioned, the wooden leg is a little distracting but wow! Great quality images.

How many assistants do you have? What time of day is this? (assuming this is an outside shoot)
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Re: Project - Brides #3

Postby aim54x on Tue Jun 29, 2010 11:32 pm

surenj wrote:Pretty amazing location, light etc! :cheers:

As already mentioned, the wooden leg is a little distracting but wow! Great quality images.

How many assistants do you have? What time of day is this? (assuming this is an outside shoot)


My thoughts exactly.

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Re: Project - Brides #3

Postby iposiniditos on Wed Jun 30, 2010 2:50 am

Many thanks for your comments, very good points!

The truth is that i have had some other poses in my mind,
but it was the first time i have seen the model and very soon
i realized that there were some limits... Althoug, it isn't her fault but mine.
The lesson for me was that i have to spend more time with the model
and not the shooting day but a day or two before to have the ability
to organize my plans better and know how much i can push a situation.

Bad english - i know - but i hope that you can understand what i'm saying.

Many thanks again for the comments and the suggestions!!
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Re: Project - Brides #3

Postby iposiniditos on Wed Jun 30, 2010 2:57 am

surenj wrote:How many assistants do you have? What time of day is this? (assuming this is an outside shoot)


I have one assistant and as for the time 6-7pm. I had to reduce three stops via ND to use f1.2 or f1.4 in these shots.
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Re: Project - Brides #3

Postby aim54x on Wed Jun 30, 2010 9:35 am

iposiniditos wrote:
surenj wrote:How many assistants do you have? What time of day is this? (assuming this is an outside shoot)


I have one assistant and as for the time 6-7pm. I had to reduce three stops via ND to use f1.2 or f1.4 in these shots.


I didnt realise there was so much light at that time of day, but then again it is the summer in Europe isnt it?
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Re: Project - Brides #3

Postby iposiniditos on Wed Jul 07, 2010 10:39 am

aim54x wrote:
iposiniditos wrote:
surenj wrote:How many assistants do you have? What time of day is this? (assuming this is an outside shoot)


I have one assistant and as for the time 6-7pm. I had to reduce three stops via ND to use f1.2 or f1.4 in these shots.


I didnt realise there was so much light at that time of day, but then again it is the summer in Europe isnt it?


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