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Amanda H (very slightly NSFW)
Had some time in the studio on Sat with Amanda... Up until now, she'd mostly done swimwear shoots, and was wanting to broaden her portfolio with fashion, lingerie and beauty shots... How did we do?
Cheers, John
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Re: Amanda H (very slightly NSFW)
You did well, There is a distracting shadow on the left of #3 but other than that nice shots!
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Re: Amanda H (very slightly NSFW)
The shadow that Ant refers to in #3, I find to be not a problem. However the shadow from the clothing on the LH side of #2 is a distraction.
That said, as always, good work John. Fuji X-Pro1 | X-E1 | X-T1 | XF14 | XF23 | XF27 | XF35 | XF56 | XF60 | XF10-24 | XF18-55 | XF55-200 | MCEX-11
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Re: Amanda H (very slightly NSFW)
John, I am struggling to find something to pick at on these, as already mentioned those shadows (only after being point out for me) are alittle distracting and could be PP'ed away. The position of the model in the first is interesting, I am not sure whether I like it or whether I would rather see her front row centre, it may grow on me!
The hair is the only other thing, the tassled look does not ring my bell, however if it is part of the desired look then its purely a preference thing for me. I like the face framing in teh last image, for some reason, I just like it and it works even tho my brain says 'put it in the middle'. gerry's photography journey
No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
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