John, I am struggling to find something to pick at on these, as already mentioned those shadows (only after being point out for me) are alittle distracting and could be PP'ed away. The position of the
model in the first is interesting, I am not sure whether I like it or whether I would rather see her front row centre, it may grow on me!
The hair is the only other thing, the tassled look does not ring my bell, however if it is part of the desired look then its purely a preference thing for me.
I like the face framing in teh last image, for some reason, I just like it and it works even tho my brain says 'put it in the middle'.