Echo Point through to Scenic World @ 35mm and 180mm

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Echo Point through to Scenic World @ 35mm and 180mm

Postby aim54x on Mon Jul 05, 2010 11:29 pm

On Sunday I got roped into going along and helping out at a joint UTS Exposure and USYD PhotoSoc event, a trip up the Katoomba. I will be first to admit that this was never going to be any fun for me, but I didnt think it would be such a painful experience.

I traveled light with only the D60, 35mm f/1.8 DX, 180mm f/3.5 and SB-400.

As a consolation I managed to get a few snaps that I like (AND realise my D60 needs a sensor clean).

Ruined Castle
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anyone have an ID for me?
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Katoomba Cascades (no tripod, but I wish I had one)
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Mountain light
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Re: Echo Point through to Scenic World @ 35mm and 180mm

Postby surenj on Tue Jul 06, 2010 12:10 pm

I really like the #1. You have compressed the view very nicely and the blue tones are a treat. Would be very effective enlarged.

#3 the blue and warm tone combination makes me a little confused. I am not sure to feel cold or warm :wink: . How about a complete blue or BW look for this one?

#4 has beautiful tones but the foreground silhouttes are not as strong to support it.

aim54x wrote:it would be such a painful experience.

How so? :wink:
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Re: Echo Point through to Scenic World @ 35mm and 180mm

Postby biggerry on Tue Jul 06, 2010 2:29 pm

aim54x wrote:but I didnt think it would be such a painful experience.


broken bones? :shock:

#2 appeals to me but needs contrast, it looks washed out. The composition is good and the flowers lead you into the image, it is also exposed spot on.
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Re: Echo Point through to Scenic World @ 35mm and 180mm

Postby colin_12 on Wed Jul 07, 2010 11:00 pm

I like the sunset Cameron. :up:
The flowers might be a Pimelia
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Re: Echo Point through to Scenic World @ 35mm and 180mm

Postby aim54x on Thu Jul 08, 2010 12:15 am

surenj wrote:I really like the #1. You have compressed the view very nicely and the blue tones are a treat. Would be very effective enlarged.

#3 the blue and warm tone combination makes me a little confused. I am not sure to feel cold or warm :wink: . How about a complete blue or BW look for this one?

#4 has beautiful tones but the foreground silhouttes are not as strong to support it.


Thanks Surenj. With #3 I will have a look at BW or Cyanotype, but this is how the camera recorded it....funny isnt it? I actually cropped #4 to reduce the foreground silhouettes, I dont think there is much more I can do with that one. Tighter crop?

biggerry wrote:#2 appeals to me but needs contrast, it looks washed out. The composition is good and the flowers lead you into the image, it is also exposed spot on.


Thanks Gerry, I will have another play. 180mm hand held in dying light....I may actually warm it up a tad as well to reflect the conditions. The 180mm seems to have a cool cast, bloody SHITMA

colin_12 wrote:I like the sunset Cameron. :up:
The flowers might be a Pimelia


Thanks Colin. That sunset was shot handheld with the 35mm.

I'll accept that ID!

aim54x wrote:but I didnt think it would be such a painful experience.

biggerry wrote:broken bones? :shock:

surenj wrote:How so? :wink:


Lets just say, stupid, inconsiderate, noisy, slow......university students that took 3hrs to walk what should have taken 1hr....and lets not mention the fallout i have copped for making a comment to the absent organisers. I was there to answer a SOS yet I am not allowed to comment on the ill preparation and the general bad behaviour that occurred. Seriously, I know your rushing off to take a pic, but you can apologise when you bump into someone, you can pick up the trash you drop (yes some idiot dropped stuff in a national park and didnt pick it up) and you can keep quiet if you expect to see some wildlife. I can understand that these fat, unfit university types (all bloody international students from SE Asia from UTS) cant hold pace but surely it dont take 3hrs to walk a 1hr trail that is manicured and mostly sealed???

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Re: Echo Point through to Scenic World @ 35mm and 180mm

Postby biggerry on Thu Jul 08, 2010 12:44 am

aim54x wrote:Lets just say, stupid, inconsiderate, noisy, slow......university students that took 3hrs to walk what should have taken 1hr....and lets not mention the fallout i have copped for making a comment to the absent organisers. I was there to answer a SOS yet I am not allowed to comment on the ill preparation and the general bad behaviour that occurred. Seriously, I know your rushing off to take a pic, but you can apologise when you bump into someone, you can pick up the trash you drop (yes some idiot dropped stuff in a national park and didnt pick it up) and you can keep quiet if you expect to see some wildlife. I can understand that these fat, unfit university types (all bloody international students from SE Asia from UTS) cant hold pace but surely it dont take 3hrs to walk a 1hr trail that is manicured and mostly sealed???

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:rotfl2: :arrow: :biglaugh:
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Re: Echo Point through to Scenic World @ 35mm and 180mm

Postby Mr Darcy on Thu Jul 08, 2010 9:13 am

biggerry wrote:
aim54x wrote:Lets just say, stupid, inconsiderate, noisy, slow......university students that took 3hrs to walk what should have taken 1hr....and lets not mention the fallout i have copped for making a comment to the absent organisers. I was there to answer a SOS yet I am not allowed to comment on the ill preparation and the general bad behaviour that occurred. Seriously, I know your rushing off to take a pic, but you can apologise when you bump into someone, you can pick up the trash you drop (yes some idiot dropped stuff in a national park and didnt pick it up) and you can keep quiet if you expect to see some wildlife. I can understand that these fat, unfit university types (all bloody international students from SE Asia from UTS) cant hold pace but surely it dont take 3hrs to walk a 1hr trail that is manicured and mostly sealed???

****END RANT*****


:rotfl2: :arrow: :biglaugh:

:agree:
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Re: Echo Point through to Scenic World @ 35mm and 180mm

Postby surenj on Fri Jul 09, 2010 2:37 pm

:rotfl2:

Mr Darcy wrote:fat, unfit university types

When I was in uni, we used to fit, fast and efficient. I suppose these days they have too much food and access to cars so don't have to walk at all!
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Re: Echo Point through to Scenic World @ 35mm and 180mm

Postby biggerry on Fri Jul 09, 2010 3:04 pm

It's amazing what a difference a degree makes isn't it?


ouch...

lucky you can buy they for 49.99 online now...
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Re: Echo Point through to Scenic World @ 35mm and 180mm

Postby aim54x on Fri Jul 09, 2010 10:21 pm

Mr Darcy wrote:It's amazing what a difference a degree makes isn't it? :P


Shame is that none of these people(?) have degrees yet.....

biggerry wrote:lucky you can buy they for 49.99 online now...


Now I am sure that some of these types are buying their way through....

surenj wrote:When I was in uni, we used to fit, fast and efficient. I suppose these days they have too much food and access to cars so don't have to walk at all!


I guess it is these UTS types....simply here to study to pick up mommy and daddy's pay cheque and keep them happy
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