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Smoke Art

Postby Big V on Tue Jul 13, 2010 12:53 am

Continuing the experimental theme, here is tonights efforts..
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Re: Smoke Art

Postby surenj on Tue Jul 13, 2010 9:30 am

Really like #1 and #2.

Are you shooting white on black and inverting them + colorise on post? :wink:
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Re: Smoke Art

Postby Big V on Tue Jul 13, 2010 12:27 pm

Correct!
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Re: Smoke Art

Postby darklightphotography on Thu Jul 15, 2010 5:53 pm

Love these pics. What sort of scale are they?
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Re: Smoke Art

Postby surenj on Thu Jul 15, 2010 7:23 pm

Also see this smoke photo from the strobist flickr stream..... very interesting.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/36412420@N07/4782874436/
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Re: Smoke Art

Postby Marvin on Thu Jul 15, 2010 8:32 pm

Kevin, it is incense smoke - the little thing at the bottom is the tip of the incense. The smoke was about 50cm high I guess. We bought 40 sticks, not knowing how long they would last and we only used one! Lots of incense at home now.
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Re: Smoke Art

Postby Matt. K on Thu Jul 15, 2010 9:52 pm

They are beautiful in a mysterious sort of way. Nice technique!
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Re: Smoke Art

Postby aim54x on Thu Jul 15, 2010 10:32 pm

Looks great...call me boring but I wouldnt mind seeing these on black. It makes me want to go shoot smoke trails again!
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Re: Smoke Art

Postby Big V on Fri Jul 16, 2010 12:55 am

Aim54, your wish has been answered..here. are a few on black.
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Re: Smoke Art

Postby surenj on Fri Jul 16, 2010 1:39 pm

I must say, I prefer the #2 on black. little bit mysterious that one.
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Re: Smoke Art

Postby DebT on Fri Jul 16, 2010 7:25 pm

Looks like you 'guys' are having heaps of fun- think you've got the wiggle of the smoke spot on
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Re: Smoke Art

Postby aim54x on Fri Jul 16, 2010 9:42 pm

I definitely prefer the ones on black.....I did a few ages ago and give them really strong, vibrant tints and people cant really tell what they really were
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