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Carnation

Postby zafra52 on Sun Jul 18, 2010 2:33 pm

This picture relies on perspective, depth of field and colour.

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Re: Carnation

Postby Matt. K on Sun Jul 18, 2010 7:17 pm

Luscious colour and unusual point of view all help to give this image some extra impact. Works for me.
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Re: Carnation

Postby stubbsy on Sun Jul 18, 2010 9:29 pm

This has a lovely painterly quality to it - I like the subtle tonings you've achieved.
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Re: Carnation

Postby biggerry on Sun Jul 18, 2010 10:03 pm

I like, its all wrong for me in some ways (symmetry and POV) but it still works...the de-sat (if that is indeed what you have done) works nicely..nice one.

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Function: adjective
Date: circa 1586
1 : of, relating to, or typical of a painter : artistic <painterly attention to detail>
2 : suggestive or characteristic of a painting or of the art of painting <painterly photography>; especially : marked by an openness of form which is not linear and in which sharp outlines are lacking <painterly brushwork> <a painterly landscape>
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Re: Carnation

Postby surenj on Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:20 pm

Unusual macro which looks so 3D! :cheers:

I am yearning to see that stem a little more however.
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Re: Carnation

Postby aim54x on Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:46 pm

Everything has already been said....

Great stuff, it looks awesome for colours/3D-look/unusual POV
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Re: Carnation

Postby zafra52 on Mon Jul 19, 2010 6:27 pm

Thank you all for your kind comments. What you see above
is pretty much what the camera saw in RAW format. The
lens is a Sigma 70-300mm f/4-5.6 DG APO Macro, ISO- 100
Shutter Speed & Time Exposure 1/40 Sec. Aperture f/6.3
Focal Length was 190 mm and tripod. Sorry surenj, there
is no stem in either of the two pictures I took from the same
position. I think I was too close and I wanted a macro shot.
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Re: Carnation

Postby stubbsy on Mon Jul 19, 2010 7:16 pm

Ah a Sigma lens - that explains the lovely softness :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :roll: :roll: :D :D

Gerry - surely you'd know by now that my command of the language is superlative. I also think you'll find the expression is "lo and behold" :lol:
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