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Amina

PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:12 pm
by zafra52
I took this photograph a couple of years ago and I decided to remove the
colour and make it in black and white. I think it gives the subject mystique
and enigma. What do you think?

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Re: Amina

PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:26 pm
by aim54x
Its in the eyes!!! The eyes here are stunning....you wouldnt have anything with more emphasis on those eyes?

Re: Amina

PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 10:47 pm
by biggerry
Its a very nice shot, the eyes are very captivating, however, and this is purely me (and subjective), the head covering scarf is just a complete turn off.

Re: Amina

PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 6:14 am
by TonyT
Nice shot I like the scarf I agree with aim54x these shots the eyes are every thing maybe sharpen and whiter but not to much

Re: Amina

PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 7:39 pm
by surenj
Very nice indeed!

Only suggestion is to try a pano crop and sharpen eyes. Very evocative portrait.

Re: Amina

PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 8:17 pm
by zafra52
Thank you all for the comments. Here is the reduced size of the
original and a 2nd version of the black and white as suggested by
surenj...

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Re: Amina

PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 9:20 pm
by sirhc55
Indeed an excellent shot that is reminiscent of the famous Afghan girl shot by a National Geographic photographer.

Re: Amina

PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 9:34 pm
by Raskill
sirhc55 wrote:Indeed an excellent shot that is reminiscent of the famous Afghan girl shot by a National Geographic photographer.


Bingo, I was thinking exactly the same!

Re: Amina

PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 3:41 pm
by DebT
not sure if you get a chance to shoot again - like the B/W but the beautiful blue eyes have been lost and the red overpowers them
DebT

Re: Amina

PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 4:41 pm
by surenj
DebT wrote:like the B/W but the beautiful blue eyes have been lost and the red overpowers them

Interesting. I suppose the next logical step is to desaturate the red shoal and supersaturate the blue eyes and see. :wink:

Re: Amina

PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 7:57 pm
by zafra52
Now, in the course of this exercise I found that I cannot desaturate the
red alone because there is a red reflection on the lady's face and it does
not look natural. Saturating the eyes alone gives an artificial look. So, this
is my best considering my limited Photoshop skills.

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Re: Amina

PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 8:34 pm
by DebT
They are just such nice eyes and so crisp ...if you are playing around give this a try OK this may not float your boat but try going back to the b/w version and layering in the colored eyes -
DebT PS the original B/W probably has the most character as a mystical shot

Re: Amina

PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:10 pm
by zafra52
Thanks for the suggestion ant the comments

Re: Amina

PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:16 pm
by aim54x
I like the 2nd B&W with the closer crop. Do try the coloured eyes, it may work on this image

Re: Amina

PostPosted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:46 pm
by zafra52
By popular request...

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Re: Amina

PostPosted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:23 pm
by aim54x
I think it is a very interesting look. I think the eyes need to be brightened a bit, but it will definitely be a very personal choice.

Re: Amina

PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 5:01 am
by DebT
certainly worth a try in my opinion but need to equal out the color in both eyes , but top marks for persistence
DebT

Re: Amina

PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 12:35 pm
by Ant
I like the first crop the most, in the later ones you appear to be losing definition in her right eye.