A few self portraits

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A few self portraits

Postby Geoff on Tue Aug 03, 2010 7:53 am

Not something I've really toyed with before, but it was POURING rain where I am today and under the balcony the light seemed pretty nice for a photo or two..and I was the only one around. So I took a few..and here they are. Constructive criticism welcomed:

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These were all shot at ISO 200 (I think), aperture priority and no flash and with the 50mm 1.4 (@ approx 5.6). Slight LR adjustments and sharpening..but not much.

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Re: A few self portraits

Postby aim54x on Tue Aug 03, 2010 9:25 am

I am getting no images....are you a vampire?? :lol:
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Re: A few self portraits

Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Aug 03, 2010 10:28 am

As per DSLRusers tradition now, another member bareing his chest for self portraits (its been a while). I prefer the two with eye contact as there are a little more engaging.
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Re: A few self portraits

Postby surenj on Tue Aug 03, 2010 10:31 am

Geoff, you are very brave posting self portraits for critique!

The window light is nice and soft like an enormous softbox or something.

I do prefer the last one with it's BW treatment. The color ones don't come together as the greens, blues and skin tones are a little discordant.
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Re: A few self portraits

Postby sirhc55 on Tue Aug 03, 2010 10:52 am

#3 does it for me. The colour is just right plus the ‘look’ is spot on.

Jeez, the warders must be real cool to let you out without supervision :wink:
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Re: A few self portraits

Postby Geoff on Tue Aug 03, 2010 6:26 pm

Thanks guys, brave or stupid to post self portraits..who knows, at least they weren't nude..eeew!
Appreciate the feedback.
I purposely didn't smile as I feel I always smile when people take photos of me, so I thought a serious tone was worth a try.
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Re: A few self portraits

Postby aim54x on Tue Aug 03, 2010 9:36 pm

I can see the images now....funny work computers

I have to admit the first is my favourite, I am just wondering what is on your mind, what are you thinking about. It is a picture that engages me. I didnt like the colour images as much, and the last just lacked the extra appeal.

Great to see someone brave enough to post a self portrait, I avoid being in photos let alone taking them of myselF!
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