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Steeple

PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2010 9:22 pm
by zafra52
I liked the contrast of colour and the angles...

Image

Re: Steeple

PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 1:38 pm
by surenj
Nice on Zafra. I agree on the colors and the angle.

There is something that erks me about this image. Perhaps it' too perfect, too symmetrical, or missing an element to add more interest... Not sure.

Would be keen to hear other peoples' thoughts.

Re: Steeple

PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 5:07 pm
by Mr Darcy
Like colours (saturation at max???) & angle, but suspect it is somewhat over-sharpened. There is a white line all the way down the RHS of the steeple.

Re: Steeple

PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 9:44 pm
by Wink
I see that whitish line around the edge of the whole building.

Re: Steeple

PostPosted: Wed Aug 25, 2010 9:45 pm
by surenj
Wink wrote:I see that whitish line around the edge of the whole building.

I can see it quite clearly on my home monitor.

Perhaps try to make that blue a little darker. The two colors clash too much IMHO.

Re: Steeple

PostPosted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 4:15 pm
by zafra52
Thanks for the comments. I'll take them on board.

Re: Steeple

PostPosted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 10:11 pm
by Matt. K
Powerful colours and strong negative shapes help to make this a compelling smack in the eye. Love it or hate it you can't ignore it. I like it! 8)