La Perouse Sunrise

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La Perouse Sunrise

Postby biggerry on Sat Aug 28, 2010 10:58 pm

no words to describe, comments and suggestions more than welcome...

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Re: La Perouse Sunrise

Postby aim54x on Sat Aug 28, 2010 11:15 pm

What no clouds???

I love the colours and motion you have captured in this set.
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Re: La Perouse Sunrise

Postby surenj on Sat Aug 28, 2010 11:18 pm

It was a very ordinary sky today. In fact we have been a little unlucky since Long reef. Better luck next week. :wink:

#1 interesting crop with the this. I think you could even crop a little more on top and bottom to focus the viewer onto that wave and rock.

Love the sheen and the compo in #2. I reckon you could pull that grad slightly up though.

How about that shot you took with the pool towards the end?
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Re: La Perouse Sunrise

Postby sedridge on Sun Aug 29, 2010 12:35 am

Good color, excellent capture of light.. I also like the composure.

I think you have done a great job...
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Re: La Perouse Sunrise

Postby biggerry on Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:14 am

surenj wrote:How about that shot you took with the pool towards the end?


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Re: La Perouse Sunrise

Postby Jenno on Sun Aug 29, 2010 10:09 am

Shame you and Suren went to the wrong location :)
#1 and 3 are the pick of these for me but bit curious as to the object in the middle of the frame that attracts my eye. Doesnt look like Suren. Perhaps you might consider cloning it out.
Water movement really makes the shots and add lots of interest although I prefer the framing and composition in 1.
#2 does nothing for me I'm afraid. :(
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Re: La Perouse Sunrise

Postby aim54x on Sun Aug 29, 2010 6:10 pm

Jenno wrote:Shame you and Suren went to the wrong location :)


Anything to show from where you went to???
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Re: La Perouse Sunrise

Postby zafra52 on Sun Aug 29, 2010 8:42 pm

Number 1. I like the colours, crop, and composition.
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Re: La Perouse Sunrise

Postby Jenno on Sun Aug 29, 2010 10:44 pm

Anything to show from where you went to???


There is a teaser in this thread Cam

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Re: La Perouse Sunrise

Postby biggerry on Sun Aug 29, 2010 11:49 pm

aim54x wrote:What no clouds???

I love the colours and motion you have captured in this set.


yeah, skippy lied to me, gonna send some peeps around to his house this week.

surenj wrote:#1 interesting crop with the this. I think you could even crop a little more on top and bottom to focus the viewer onto that wave and rock.


yeah, tried to mix up the composition a bit here, I have quite a stock of half decent images of this position so I thought a different crop might go well.

surenj wrote:Love the sheen and the compo in #2. I reckon you could pull that grad slightly up though.


good call, I get slack with the position of the grads, its often only once its on the bit scren do you notice those slightly off numbers!


Jenno wrote:Shame you and Suren went to the wrong location


who said the wrong location, maybe we had the right one? :roll: :rotfl2:

Jenno wrote:#1 and 3 are the pick of these for me but bit curious as to the object in the middle of the frame that attracts my eye. Doesnt look like Suren. Perhaps you might consider cloning it out.


thats Suren, drying himself off after a big set.

Jenno wrote:Water movement really makes the shots and add lots of interest although I prefer the framing and composition in 1.


yeah water movement is probably one of teh key parts of my compositions when I have little in the sky to work with.

Jenno wrote:#2 does nothing for me I'm afraid.


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Re: La Perouse Sunrise

Postby ozimax on Mon Aug 30, 2010 12:13 am

They're all good but nos 1&4 are fantastic. What time of day was this Gerry?

Edit: Sorry just read the other post and found it was a sunrise shoot. Der. Here I am sitting next to the beach in Adelaide where the sun sets over the water.
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Re: La Perouse Sunrise

Postby surenj on Mon Aug 30, 2010 12:28 am

ozimax wrote:What time of day was this Gerry?

0618 was the sunrise Ozi. :up:
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Re: La Perouse Sunrise

Postby ozimax on Mon Aug 30, 2010 12:43 am

surenj wrote:
ozimax wrote:What time of day was this Gerry?

0618 was the sunrise Ozi. :up:


I love sunrises...one day I'm going to get up and see one. :biglaugh:
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Re: La Perouse Sunrise

Postby biggerry on Mon Aug 30, 2010 2:52 pm

ozimax wrote:Here I am sitting next to the beach in Adelaide where the sun sets over the water.


That sounds nice, better than a bunch of smelly mountains that we got here in sydney.

ozimax wrote:I love sunrises...one day I'm going to get up and see one.


I think I might start living vicariously through others on these sunrises now, the early morning really hurts about 4pm..need a nanna nap I think :rotfl2:
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Re: La Perouse Sunrise

Postby pennylane1284 on Thu Sep 02, 2010 2:06 pm

Good job. I think it's OK that there are no clouds; i might have distracted us from the composition of the rocks and the waves.
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Re: La Perouse Sunrise

Postby surenj on Fri Sep 03, 2010 12:41 am

Hey Gerry, the last two are pretty well executed from a color point of view. I can now see where you are done selective warmth. :wink:

That tonal contrast really pops those greens. Did you any extra greens??
Did you use the grads for these??
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Re: La Perouse Sunrise

Postby biggerry on Mon Sep 06, 2010 1:17 am

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ahh man... there I was thinking she was talking a genuine interesting my photos, what a let down :roll:

surenj wrote:Hey Gerry, the last two are pretty well executed from a color point of view. I can now see where you are done selective warmth.

That tonal contrast really pops those greens. Did you any extra greens??
Did you use the grads for these??


Warmth added globally, both shots are HDR and taken with teh GND in place. The tonal contrast can really help to bring out detail in parts of an image, used correctly I reckon its a pretty powerful tool, the same effect can be created with a number of steps in CNX2 but the tonal contrast option is quicker and easier.

No extra colours added, only global saturation from memory.

I really wanted to get more detail in the stuff under the water - should have popped on the CPL - next time.
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Re: La Perouse Sunrise

Postby surenj on Mon Sep 06, 2010 1:52 am

biggerry wrote:there I was thinking she was talking a genuine interesting my photos

:rotfl2: What she? I think most female photographers are out there taking pictures rather than yakking in forums. :wink: The rest don't know the first thing about aperture but still make great images...

Thanks for the editing info Gerry. It's not easy to guess.
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