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Release the beast within....

Postby surenj on Fri Oct 01, 2010 12:35 am

Was a little bored tonight so decided to lightpaint a little...

I guess the idea was to create a little mystery out of a relatively boring object... :mrgreen:

C&C appreciated.

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Re: Release the beast within....

Postby aim54x on Mon Oct 04, 2010 8:44 pm

A very different approach...and a great feel to it.
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Re: Release the beast within....

Postby malificentmuse on Mon Oct 04, 2010 8:48 pm

I love how it gives off a feeling of sleekness and elegance! though the chunk missing in the wheel is a bit distracting for me :/
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Re: Release the beast within....

Postby chrisk on Mon Oct 04, 2010 8:51 pm

i think it looks brilliant. love it surenj.
although i agree that the front wheel looks wierd, would like to have seen more of it or none of it.
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Re: Release the beast within....

Postby biggerry on Wed Oct 06, 2010 9:00 pm

surenj wrote:I guess the idea was to create a little mystery out of a relatively boring object...


I reckon you have succeeded here Suren, you have made a lumpy, fat Rav4 look like a sleek mean beast, clever use of 'not showing it all' to get a more dramatic effect. Great stuff, I assume soft box with your led torch? or was it a bare led?
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