OCF @ Chinoiserie
Posted:
Mon Oct 04, 2010 10:44 pm
by aim54x
Re: OCF @ Chinoiserie
Posted:
Mon Oct 04, 2010 10:57 pm
by surenj
Nice to see you joining the hardcore OCF club...
#1 needs Andrew's softbox to soften the light. Take that hose out of the background while you are at it...
#2 is quite nice indeed. I would crop really tight as a portrait.... have two halves of each flower visible only....
Re: OCF @ Chinoiserie
Posted:
Mon Oct 04, 2010 11:07 pm
by aim54x
I'm not really joining the HARDCORE OCF club, but I do indulge in OCF a bit more now.
Thank damn hose...I didnt even notice it when I checked the back of the camera...but then again i was trying to keep the viewfinder dry.
Re: OCF @ Chinoiserie
Posted:
Wed Oct 06, 2010 9:16 pm
by biggerry
The flower shots are nice, in particular the third one catches my eye as being well composed and exposed. With the OCF i reckon you need to work on balancing the flash with teh amibent, this can also be helped with Surens suggestion of the diffuser,ATJ's one is spot on, which I have used and is quite effective, cheap and easy.